For now, this is the last chapter I've written. I'm storyboarded up to chapter 28 (I have issues!) but only have shot about half of Chapter 6, which will be an interesting chapter.
In this chapter there is some violent
content, implied. No blood, no gore. Just.. simulated people being
simulated assholes. Yeah. Oh, and shitty French and Cantonese. Because it's been ages since I've used either one. Also please excuse my attempts at foreign culture, if I am not accurate. This is not meant to be racist or anything of the sort.
THEN: (JFC I watch too much Supernatural) A lot of dialog.
Two local yokels meet the Big Bad in the Bayou, and they leave to go see
their mob boss with a big sack o' cash. Big Bad is a creepy mofo who
requests a delivery, not DiGiorno. Karena and Walter dance around the
whole subject, while poor Gabriel is trying
so hard not to interfere, as per Balthasar's rules.
NOW: MOAR dialog, this time with better filler, more fleshing out and some.... things coming to a head.